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Friday, November 24, 2006

The Purpose and the Villain

Stars, crystal shards of the sky?

The Purpose
  • Explore story variations (travels among various groups of people)
  • changing ways of the hero, what can influence a protagonist's decisions
  • Fate v. chance (as stated before)
  • The girl is contested over, she is "chosen one" of fate, for unknown reasons
The Villain
  • Erudite, occult magician
  • Dangerous, threatening - but only does what you allow him to?
  • Manipulative, conniving, convincing, sly, trickster
  • Devious, only hints upon the sexually perverse to the hero
  • Enchants the heroine?
  • Grows stronger with death, feeds on death? Gains from others' death.
Scenes with Villain
  • Kidnaps her, leaves her [incapacitated] without physical harm? She is rescued, but is somehow enticed [battered persons syndrome?] to run back to him? Almost sexual, but never reaches that point.
  • Shows her stars, points to large, visible/broken nebula or Milky Way. Explains her importance. "Without you, I would not be; we would not be" (or this belongs with her evil twin)

More Ideas of Transportation
nighttime is the most mysterious time of consciousness, so:
  • runs into dark forest, comes out in morning in diff. place
  • beach: sees scrying tidepool, large waves crashes over rocks, knocks her over into the ocean, she is washed upon distant shores
Scene Ideas
  • driving, watching overpasses and shining hubcaps, listening to radio of current events: Imperialist war, poisoning of Russian president etc etc - intro of a girl who may seem dead on the outside? Go down to Santa Cruz --> beach?
  • Being sucked into a black hole, Vortex. being pulled from one place to another. Vision, dream, out of body, or real.

Possible Conclusions
  • It's all a dream
  • She's really dead
  • She is transported to another galaxy, dimension, universe, etc - pulled because of half and half wanting to become whole again? So how does it end?
  • Does she go home or does she stay in the special world? Does she die?

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